help? somebody that i used to know

[annice]

okay so i kinda had a dream about this and i don't know i figured i throw it in here and see if anyone likes the idea or would be willing to help me out at all? its pretty basic but i am going to give you the whole drawn out idea than a summery at the end mkay? kay.

back in highschool ann was kinda the shy girl who mostly just stayed within her group of friends and did well the normal military teenager things, she was in no way shape or form like she is now, that upbeat friends with anyone and everyone girl was nearly non-existent in sixteen year old ann. she played soccer in high school, and that's how she met eh let's call them jessie sure why not (i also can't decide if i want it to be a boy or girl so yeah hence the slightly ambiguous name) and pretty much they became good friends, now if its gonna be a guy i was kinda wanting it to turn into the direction of flirting friends (possible him chasing her and she just being too shy and "innocent" more like knowing her dad would shoot any guy that liked her to have a boyfriend) and if its a girl more like best bamf friends. and anyway after ann got back from overseas they tried visiting her in the hospital and she would just beg the nurse to get them out and there that she refused to let them see her like that, and after she was released and went home, she would ignore their calls, tell her parents that she didn't want to see them, but being parents they'd let them in every once in a while to try and get ann out of her depressed slump and she would just have all out tantrums over it, saying stuff she ultimately didn't mean.

now flash to the present, they moved to boston (i really want them to be on the good side of the law but details are fuzzy now) and ann sees them by chance and just wants to right things with them, and it is that exact now you're just somebody that i used to know scene going on with her wanting to apologize and explain things and just right her wrongs and them just keeping that brick wall between them tall and strong.

now for the summary:
it's one of ann's best friends from highschool, they even kept in contact when ann went into the marines but after she got back and woke up from the coma she all out didn't want them around her or to see her and she just wanted to be miserable and full of self-pity but these days they move to boston for their own reasons and ann sees them by chance and they give her that bit of third-degree for how she treated them years ago even though she has changed and wants to apologize and right her wrongs.
edit: or we could have it the opposite way where ann is still sketchy about them being in her life and they are still wanting to make sure she is okay and all that?

what i need help with:
-well any opinions would be nice
-boy or girl (i have like a handful of pbs picked out for both i just cant decide)
-anything else you want to add or say

[fiona]

i think the idea is adorable! the whole awkwardness thing would be really fun to play out, maybe they'd feel awkward around ann because they never really understood why she closed up? the conflict in the story is just so awesome. i love conflict. i think it could really go either way, as far as male versus female. if it was a male, then they could obviously eventually become finals. and female, they'd be awesome bffls, but romance is usually more popular to write i guess? i didn't give many thoughts, but hopefully some of my tiny ramble will help!

[jessie]

like royal said, this is the most adorable plot. it could go either way with a boy/girl, but both romances would totally work. maybe it could even become a love triangle with both a boy and a girl? either way the plot would be interesting!

[annice]

Ha okay I got it we could get the bamf best friend and the romantic tie with drumroll please.... either basic siblings or fraternal twins.

[jessie]

TWINS FOR SURE!

[royalstandard]

YAY TWINS!