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Post by jessie on Jan 29, 2013 11:10:31 GMT -5
i came up with this plot after royal and i discussed creating an escort service for one of the mafia's. i read something similar in a fanfiction, so if you've read it, that's awesome. if not, well, that's why i'm writing this. i really think this could work, but i wanted to know if anyone had feedback for me about the characters or the plot in general. it would really help.
annalise harrington is twenty-one years old and has been in the escort service since she was eighteen years old. after her parents died in a car accident when she was fifteen, she was shipped around to different foster families. when she turned eighteen, she moved into boston, hoping to do something exciting with her life. instead, she found out how hard it was to live in such a big city and still manage to make payments at the right time. one day, a gentleman saw her wandering through the park and said that she was so beautiful and would she like to take part in a business venture? desperate for money, anna said yes and he brought her into the irish mafia as a escort. she was one of the original escorts of the business and is now helping the newer girls get used to their jobs.
the only true reason she has stayed in the business for as long as she has is because of the money. she has no other way of supporting herself because the irish mafia rent her out all the time. yes, she understands that this is not morally right, but it pays. she can earn up to six grand a night. everything is price out, from just a dinner date or her as a date to an event or even her escorting someone to an event and then sleeping with them. she discusses prices when the person calls her, and the money then goes into the bank. only half the money is for her, the other half is the mafia.
this is when she meets david (his name can be changed). david is a business man for the irish mafia and is pretty high up in the mafia family. while he isn't one of the original family members, he is close up. he highers anna as his escort for the night, to some big event that the city of boston is holding. eventually, they go back to his place and have mind blowing sex. in the morning, when the wake up, david mentions that he wants to see her again. anna is cautious about the idea, but accepts it anyways, knowing that he'll pay her some of the times they spend time together. david starts to spend as much free time as he can with her, and feelings start to develop. she doesn't want these feelings, knowing that the feeling will make it difficult for her to do her job correctly. and she knows that most men don't want to date a girl that has to date and sleep with other men for a living.
but david tells her that he wants to date her, and she can't refused. he challenges her and drives her insane, but is spontaneous and caring that anna needs him in her life. so they start dating secretly, because they both know that connor sewlyn wouldn't approve of his best escort dating someone in the mafia. but david can't handle the idea that she still has to sell herself to strange men and have sex with them. so he offers to pay her double when they start dating, that way she doesn't have to work as much as normal. but instead of being grateful, anna gets pissed. she thinks that this is just another job, just a little bit more twisted.
eventually, i want these two to end up together. but i wanted to write the whole plot out with the details that i think could make it fun. it'll be a long plot, since i can't really seeing anna just dating someone. she's not a big believer of love because of all the fake dating and everything she has to do. so for david to come in and show her that there is such a thing as love would scare her shitless.
for david, i was thinking he was twenty-five to twenty-seven years old. i was thinking about ian somerhalder or mark salling (but we can talk about it), and i haven't decided who i want anna to be yet. if you have any ideas, let me know please. even feedback could help a lot.
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Post by LENNOX RAFFERTY SELWYN on Jan 29, 2013 12:20:27 GMT -5
obviously, i approve of this plot, and you already know this. bahahaha i like that idea of the whole catch 22 situation (the girl loves the boy but can't be with the boy b/c of her job/life), etc etc. the only things i can think to add right now would be to clarify a couple of things.
the escort service is going to be something the irish are just setting up, so we could plot that part where lennox physically finds her instead of this having happened when she was eighteen. (since it hasn't been around for three years) she could still be the prime one, like the first that lennox gathers, but i see this project as being all lennox. connor would oversee it from afar, approving of the fact that his brother isn't gay after all (BAHAHAHA), but he wouldn't be involved in it at all. so he honestly wouldn't care much about her falling in love with david!man. he would probably laugh at lennox when it happened, pleased that anna was giving lennox a hard time (since he considers lennox his own personal pain in the ass and thinks nox deserves to have someone else cause him irritation; he's an asshole, what can i say?). on the other hand, lennox could show his irritable side when his 'best girl' starts falling for a costumer. lennox needs to show a little pique every once in a while, and he doesn't get to do it often. pimp!lennox ftw.
but anyway, she would definitely be plottable with lennox as her 'boss/pimp daddy/whatever' and kahlan (especially if you do use naya b/c she's gorg and they're bffls irl so WIN). i am pro-mark salling as the dude (although that isn't my choice, i like voicing my opinion anyway bahaha) because he isn't used as much as ian tbh. ian is beautiful, don't get me wrong, but i like seeing faces that aren't used as often. i'm weird?
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